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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Sat Aug 22, 2009 12:29 am

    First topic message reminder :

    okey everyone this is my new fan fic.
    this will follow the story from Ichiro (son of Jin and Ling) and Celine (daughter of Lili and the Commander.
    this will take place about 15 years after the end of my other fan fic.
    Ichiro is a strong young boy who slowly becomes a Rebel just like his father.
    While Celine is becomming a littel Devil's girl but finds out the truth later.
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    Post by Snow on Sat Aug 22, 2009 9:05 pm

    That's why I asked him for joining our website here. But I still have one question to him:

    Can we call you Roy JunkazamaFan15? It's your real name, right?

    (I always said the Account-Names to him everywhere.)
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    Post by IWAO on Sat Aug 22, 2009 9:19 pm

    Is that his real name? Well I guess we've to wait to get an answer on this one from him.


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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Sat Aug 22, 2009 9:21 pm

    yes Roy is mine real name and I don't mind if you call me Roy
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    Post by Snow on Sat Aug 22, 2009 9:32 pm

    Alright, Roy. =)
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    Post by IWAO on Sat Aug 22, 2009 9:58 pm

    Oh so I can call him this. Then'll I do that, if I feel I want to.


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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Sun Aug 23, 2009 1:27 pm

    CHAPTER 4: THE LAST HOPE?
    Ichiro trained everyday for more then 12 hours.
    after he found out that Devil was the strongest creature on earth.
    He trained with his fighting skills his angel gene and with sword fighting.
    Ling: come on Ichiro get some rest for a change.
    Ichiro while still training.
    Ichiro I can't mother Devil won't take a break until he has taken over the world.
    Ling: well then then you won't be intrest too know that your father has arrived.
    Ichiro: my father where is he?
    Jin: I am here.
    while Jin came walking out house.
    Ichiro hey father and they hugged eachother.
    Jin: what have I heard? have you been training alot
    Ichiro: yes I just want too be like you.
    Jin: well I think you are strong enough too come with us.
    Ling: eh Jin I don't think that's such a good idea.
    Jin: why not he's old and strong enough.
    Ling: but he is stil a child.
    Jin; that's why he's not going too do too dangerous things.
    Ichiro: ahhh please mom????
    Jin: I will promise you this sweety he will not get hurt.
    Ling: well ok if he won't stay away for years just like you.
    Jin: well don't worry about that it will only take about 2 months.
    now go gather your stuff and don't take too mcuh with you and then we will be going.
    and of course say good bye too your mother.
    Ichiro: ok father.
    Jin somehow felt happy when he heard him saying that.
    Jin and Ling were talking together when Ichiro was away.
    Jin: I will miss you hon.
    and jin gave her a kiss.
    Ling: I will miss you tooo.
    they heard Ichiro comign of the stairs.
    Jin: so are you ready too leave now?
    Ichiro: just a few seconds please I still have too say goodbye too my mother.
    Goodbye mother and he gave Ling a hug.
    Ling: bye my son take care and let me hear of you.
    Ichiro: I will bye bye.
    and Jin + Ichiro left in the car.
    Jin; now what I am about too tell you might sound strange or weird.
    the reason why you could come with me is we need you too protect another Rebel.
    her name is Julia and we know that Devil has sent someone too kill her.
    Ichiro: and you want me too take care of that person?
    Jin: of course not your staying with Julia.
    I will take care of that person.
    Ichiro; mmmmm.
    Jin: we will be there soon enough.
    Ichiro: okay.....
    *after a few hours*
    Jin: aha we have arrived.
    Ichiro looked out the window from the car and saw a mansion.
    Ichiro: does she live there?
    Jin: hmm in that mansion? yes that's her home.
    end of chapter 4
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    Post by Snow on Sun Aug 23, 2009 2:29 pm

    That's >soooo< entertaining me! Smile
    And you never get tired of writing more stuff. I hope your creative ideas won't end. Arrow
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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Sun Aug 23, 2009 2:42 pm

    Snow wrote:That's >soooo< entertaining me! Smile
    And you never get tired of writing more stuff. I hope your creative ideas won't end. Arrow
    hehehe don't worry about that
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    Snow is right. You're very good at this!


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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Sun Aug 23, 2009 4:02 pm

    IWAO wrote:Snow is right. You're very good at this!
    Thank you Snow and IWAO
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    No problem mate. Just keep up the good work! This is one of the reasons why you deserved the promotion... I've more for you soon, but not now lol! Razz


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    CHAPTER 5 ICHIRO VS CELINE
    Julia finally you two arrived.
    Jin: it was a long journey..
    Ichiro: I would have rather gone with the Helicopter...
    Jin: Ichiro you know that's too dangerous.
    Ichiro: yes but still.
    Julia: anyway I have prepared some food if you two would like some?
    Jin and Ichiro OF COURSE!
    and they went inside.
    *The Next day*
    Jin Julia and Ichiro went too the forest.
    Jin jumped into a lake.
    Jin: hey look here it's a snake!
    Julia:ieuw
    Ichiro: haha can I come too???
    Jin: yes but be carefull.
    Ichiro jumped into the lake....
    they both played in the water as father and son.
    Julia jumped into the lake a few minuts later then Ichiro.
    at that moment...
    Jin: I can sense it.........
    Ichiro: what can you sense father???
    Jin she's here close by.
    Julia: who's close by?
    Jin; the servent from Devil who was sent too kill you.
    strange for a young girl she is very strong with the Devil gene.
    Ichiro: like I am with the Angel gene?
    Jin: something like that.
    we should hurry inside.
    they quickly went inside.
    as they went inside the feeling went weaker..
    Ichiro: I can sense it aswell.
    it feels like she thing Julia lives somewere else.
    Jin: it may seem like that but be on your guard.
    you may never know.
    Julia: somebody has too go too the city there isn't enough food left anymore.
    Jin: I will go I can't let Ichiro or you go it's too dangerous + Ichiro doesn't know the way.
    Julia gave Jin some money and a list.
    julia: good luck Jin.
    Jin: thank you Julia and son protect Julia will you.
    Ichiro: I will father I will.
    Jin was gone and Ichiro had a awfull feeling..
    Ichiro: she is close I can feel it.
    in the room beside him came noice...
    Ichiro while running too the Room
    Ichiro: JULIA HOLD ON I'M COMMING FOR YOU!
    when he arrived he saw that he was already too late.
    Celine had killed Julia..
    Ichiro: nooo. and he looked at Julia then at Celine.
    Celine: are you gonna look at me the hole day???
    or are you going too run away?
    it's your choice.
    Ichiro: neither I will fight you
    he knew his father said that he shouldn't do that but he had too for Julia...
    Celine: if your not with me then you are my enemy...
    Ichiro was considering he sensed that she was the girl with the strong Devil gene.
    Ichiro: I will do what I must...
    Celine: you will try!!
    she jumped into the air and the two started too fight with there swords.
    while fighting they went outside too the lake.
    where Ichiro Julai and Jin were in earlier today.
    Celine's weapon felt on the ground and Ichiro took his change
    and took her throat....
    almost he was able too kill but yet.....
    she kicked on his back and Ichiro felt on the ground.....
    then Celine took her weapon and tried too split Ichiro in half with it....
    Ichiro trained with this situation.
    took his weapon with his feets and threw it too his hands.
    and hold Celine back from killing him...
    the two fought further....
    with his powers he pushed Celine too the other side of the lake.
    Ichiro: It's over Celine.
    Celine: you underestimate the power of the Devil gene.
    Ichiro: Don't try it!
    Celine smiled and jumped too Ichiro.
    with his sword he cut her feets off when she was about too land.
    she felt almost in the water from that attack..
    Celine Screamed of the pain..
    Ichiro: you were the chosen one with me.
    It was said that you would destroy Devil not join him!
    Bring balance too the world not leave it in darkness!
    while Celine was trying too come out of the water..
    ( the water had raised.)
    Celine: I HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!!
    with a sad voice.
    Ichiro turned around and he said.
    Ichiro: you were my sister Celine..
    I loved you...
    the water was raising too fast for Celine too get out in time..
    Ichiro walked away with her and his sword. hoping that she would be saved from the Devil gene.
    when arrived at home..
    he saw that his father was back...
    Jin was looking at Julia..
    Jin: I don't know what too say...
    Ichiro: pfff she was killed by that girl....
    Jin: where is she now?
    Ichiro she is death. I killed her.
    she is in the lake.....
    Jin went too the lake with Ichiro....
    end of chapter 5
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    Again, well done!
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    Thank you very much
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    Post by IWAO on Sun Aug 23, 2009 5:01 pm

    This is really what I call a fanfic dude! Smile


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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Mon Aug 24, 2009 8:38 pm

    alternate ending for Chapter 5 Ichiro vs Celine.
    this ending would happen if Celine won the fight.
    but the other ending (where Ichiro won is the true ending)
    Ichiro: It's over Celine.
    Celine: you underestimate the power of the Devil gene.
    Ichiro: Don't try it!
    Celine smiled and jumped too Ichiro.
    Ichiro took his sword but he was too late..
    Celine had already jumped and was standing behind him.
    she used here weapon too stab Ichiro trough the heart.
    Ichiro felt death on the ground..
    after that Celine kicked Ichiro in the lake...
    she stared at the lake for a few minuts and then she walked away..
    her mission was done..
    she returned too G Corporation.
    she saw Devil standing with Bryan before the doors.
    Celine: What is this?
    Devil: Celine kill him..
    that will be your last mission.
    Celine looked at Devil and then at Bryan.
    Celine: I am sorry Bryan.
    she took her sword.
    Bryan did the same.
    they started too fight but it was hopeless for Bryan Celine was too strong with the Devil Gene.
    Celine killed Bryan after he went on his knees
    Devil laughed..
    welll done Celine
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    Lol I just have to read this. I love it! Very Happy


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    IWAO wrote:Lol I just have to read this. I love it! Very Happy
    thank you Wink
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    Agreed! Very Happy
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    No problem mate. You're our fanfic dude! Smile


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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Tue Aug 25, 2009 10:28 pm

    lol
    CHAPTER 6 THE REVENGE OF DEVIL?
    While returning to the real world.
    she found her self tied up on a she didn't know what it was sort an of table??
    Celine: aaaaaaaaaaghhhhhhhhh.
    YOU! YOU KILLED ME!
    she saw Ichiro standing before her.
    Ichiro: No you forced me to fight you and that's why you ended up like this.
    Celine: ugh wait until G corporation finds me.
    Ichiro: they have been lying to you. The Commander (your father)
    never wanted to kill you. and about your mother she is just fighting for our freedom.
    Celine: I don't believe YOU!
    Ichiro: then listen to your mother.
    Celine: my mother?
    and she saw a women coming in the room.
    Celine: l... Lili?
    Lili: yes Celine it's me.
    It's all true what he said Celine.
    Devil has been lying to you every day since day 1.
    how could Devil do this to a young girl.
    Jin came running into the room.
    Jin: glad that your awake.
    now we repaired your feets aswell.
    you just look like you always did.
    Celine finally realised the truth.
    Celine: so he lied too me followed that I killed Rebels for him?
    Jin and Lili looked at each other.
    Lili: I am afraid so....
    Celine how can I be so stupid!!
    Jin: Celine you are only a 13 year old girl.
    you can't blame your self.
    but the worst part is.
    Devil knows that your stil alive.
    he lost his best Servant.
    it might be possible that he will send some soldiers to look for you here.
    and that is what happend.
    I saw 4 soldiers walking around the city today.
    we should go.
    It's no longer save here.
    Ichiro: but father where should we go.
    Jin: first to your mother.
    he took a breath.
    gather your stuff were leaving tonight!
    Celine: wait! what about me?
    Jin: your coming with us I got some clothes for you.
    take them and come in two hours outside.
    *after two hours*
    Jin: good you are all here.
    now go into the car we don't have any time to lose.
    Meanwhile at the G corporation.
    Officer: Devil we stil haven't found her yet.
    the change is big that she has been killed.
    Devil: NO I sense that she is alive you guys have just been looking in the wrong place.
    she already left.
    but I've send a surpise for her. hehe
    *back in the car with Jin Ichiro Lili and Celine*
    Ichiro: father I saw a strange light outside moving very fast.
    it seems to be following us.
    Jin stopped the car.
    and he waited a few minuts.
    A strange looking creature jumped before there car.
    Jin Ichiro Lili and Celine came out the car
    the moment they came out the car the creature which appeared to be a Werewolv
    he attacked Celine (tried to kill her)
    Jin: I knew it he has been sent to eleminate Celine.
    He tried to attack the creature.
    but the moment he tried to attack he was already gone.
    Ichiro: how can we stop him when he is so fast?
    the werewolf attacked Ichiro.
    Jin: Ichiro!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    however Ichiro manadged to hold the werewolf back.
    and defeated him by using his Sword.
    Ichiro: let's go.
    and they went to Ichiro's mother.
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    Chapter 7 (Bonus Chapter) The German party
    this chapter will take place after a battle in germany between the Rebels(soldiers) and G Corporation.
    the Rebels won of course.
    also here and there there might be some German to make it look more realistic but I Might post English translations later
    also this will be a short chapter as this is a Bonus Chapter and isn't really important.

    Ichiro: were are we going to Dad?
    Jin: didn't I told you?
    we are going to a Party!
    They had to travel a few days before they arrived in Germany.
    Lili Jin Ling Ichiro and Celine were invited for the party because people thought they were the last hope.
    finally they arrived in Germany Berlin
    Celine: is it here?
    This place looks awesome!!
    meanwhile a soldier came walking to there car.
    soldier: Kann ich Ihre Einladung?
    Lili Ling Ichiro and Celine didn't understand German so........
    Jin saw the look on there faces
    Jin: he said, May I have your invitation?
    Jin gave the invitation to the Soldier.
    The Soldier gave it back to Jin
    Jin: Danke(Thank you)
    and they went further.
    Later that evening.
    the girls and boys from the rebels arrived at the Party.
    apparantly you could do more then just Dance and have something to eat.
    you could also watch a movie.
    and drink (of course)
    Jin walked to the place where people were sitting before the Television.
    Jin:which Movie is this?
    guy: this movie? it's called Zwartboek= Dutch and it means Blackbook
    this actress her name is Carice van houten.
    Jin: okay and he walked away.
    Ichiro came running too Jin
    Ichiro: Dad Celine is flirting with some Guys.
    Jin; oh my let her she is getting old enough.
    besides she is Lili's daughter not mine.
    Ichiro: but but.....
    Jin: your in love with her right?
    Ichiro looked at the ground.
    with a sad voice
    Ichiro: yes dad.
    Jin: you should tell her.
    go go else she will get a different BF.
    and Ichiro walked to Celine and told her his feelings.
    I told you guys this would be short
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    Chapter 8 mother and son part 1
    The Rebels have returned at home from the party in Germany.
    and Ichiro finally told Celine the truth about his feelings for her.
    after that they spent time together alone.(want to know about it?)
    apparantly Celine had the same feelings about Ichiro.
    it was a true love night between them Shocked

    *back at home*
    Jin: okay i know everyone is tired because of the party but tomorrow were heading too a temple.
    Lili: why Jin???
    Jin: I dunno I got this letter from someone I don't know
    but anyway let's get all a goodnight sleep.
    Goodnight everyone.
    goodnight says everyone
    *The Next day*
    Everyone awakened and took there breakfast
    Lili: ok let's go everyone.
    Jin; not yet.
    I want you me and Celine too stay here.
    Lili and Celine: WHAT? WHY?
    Jin: I don't thrust it.
    hon Ichiro you two go please?
    Ling: ok we will it would be good for Ichiro's fighting skills.
    Jin: indeed it would be
    take care you two!
    Ichiro: thanks dad we will.
    Ling: let's go Ichiro.
    Ichiro: sure thing mom.
    bye dad Lili and Celine.

    they walked out house.
    Ling: we will go by car I can't fly and your too young for the Helicopter.
    Ichiro: ok mom.
    they stept into the car and traveled for about 4 hours.
    *after those 4 hours they arrived at The Temple*
    Ling: close the door Ichiro.
    I don't wanna get trouble with your father when the car is stolen.
    now follow me please.
    Ichiro: alright alright...
    they walked too the temple....
    but they didn't know what to do...
    Ling: what to do now????
    Soldier: finally you two arrived.
    Jin already informed us that you two were coming here.
    Ling and Ichiro were your names right?
    Ling: yes that's our names.
    Soldier: good names.
    now follow us inside please if you would like.
    meanwhile
    another soldier came running to them.
    Soldier: I stil haven't find the bathroom.
    and I need to...
    Captian: that's not possible.
    all the bathrooms are broken..
    Soldier: but sir I really need to.
    another soldier said me too sir.
    the Captian asked his commander.
    you also have to go too the Bathroom?
    Commander: actually yes.
    Captian; then go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
    It's not mine bathroom.
    *20 minutes later*
    Captian: now are we finally done with going too the bathroom?
    Soldiers: yes Sir.
    Captian: Ok then Follow me inside.
    and they walked inside.
    just as they went inside.
    the door went open.
    everyone stared at the door.
    and they saw a man standing there.
    Ling: It's Devil.
    Captian: we will take the long way.
    The Soldiers went away
    Ling Ichiro started to fight against devil.
    which wasn't easy he was much more powerfull then both.
    They came in a large room and as soon as they came in there Devil kicked Ichiro in the face which caused him too fall on the stairs.
    Meanwhile The fight lasted with Devil Vs Ling.
    Ichiro came back at his feeds and ran too his mother.
    thing's weren't going in Ling's favour Devil took her weapon.
    at that moment Devil saw his change.
    Ichiro came running too them.
    Ichiro: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
    Devil had stabbed Ling with her own weapon.
    Ichiro was left alone in the fight with Devil.
    Be continued.
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    Wow thanks a lots for this one, and it's a time, that I haven't seen you dude. So it's because of school right?


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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Sun Sep 13, 2009 2:48 pm

    IWAO wrote:Wow thanks a lots for this one, and it's a time, that I haven't seen you dude. So it's because of school right?
    yeah school this year is alot more work then last years.
    and I have been translating my first fanfic I might post it or not

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