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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Sat Aug 22, 2009 12:29 am

    First topic message reminder :

    okey everyone this is my new fan fic.
    this will follow the story from Ichiro (son of Jin and Ling) and Celine (daughter of Lili and the Commander.
    this will take place about 15 years after the end of my other fan fic.
    Ichiro is a strong young boy who slowly becomes a Rebel just like his father.
    While Celine is becomming a littel Devil's girl but finds out the truth later.
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    Post by IWAO on Sun Sep 13, 2009 3:04 pm

    JunkazamaFan15 wrote:
    IWAO wrote:Wow thanks a lots for this one, and it's a time, that I haven't seen you dude. So it's because of school right?
    yeah school this year is alot more work then last years.
    and I have been translating my first fanfic I might post it or not
    I understand dude. And I've also to do more work, than I'm used to, so I know what you mean dude. And okay that would be nice mate! Wink


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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Sun Sep 13, 2009 4:50 pm

    oh well here's the next chapter
    I've decided to keep this chapter short.
    enjoy
    Chapter 9: mother and son part 2

    *In the Temple*
    Ichiro was staring at his mother and then at Devil.
    Devil was smiling.
    He knew that without his mother he was afraid of him.
    Ichiro took his sword.
    and be begon to attack Devil.
    Devil: your anger has made you powerfull boy.
    Ichiro was full of rage..
    he broke Devil's sword in two pieces.
    followed by a kick in his face.
    Devil felt on the ground.
    Ichiro pointed his sword at Devil.
    Ichiro: it's game over for you!
    Devil: you are even stronger then we thought.
    Ichiro stil pointing his sword at devil.
    what's that supposed to mean?
    Devil: you'll find out soon enough.
    and he dissapeared right before Ichiro's eyes.
    Ichiro let his word fall on the ground and ran to his mother.
    He took her in his arms.
    Ling: It's too late.
    Ichiro; NOOOOOO mom
    Ling: Ichiro promise me that you will defeat him.
    Ichiro: I promise mother.
    with a sad voice.
    Ling: Leave me behind.
    Ichiro: no I got to save you.
    Ling: you already have.
    and those were her last words.
    Ichiro: I won't leave YOU!!!!!
    but it was too late his mother was already dead.
    Ichiro: mom?
    noooooooooooooooooooo
    he was crying. before his dead mother.
    a dew seconds later a bright white light appeared behind him.
    ???:you can't do anything for her.
    Ichiro turned around.
    Who are you?
    ???: I'm your grandmother.
    Ichiro: is it you Jun?
    Jun: yes it's me.
    Ichiro: but you dyed about uhm 15/16 years ago?
    Jun: yes it's true I am death.
    however I can stil appear as ghost.
    Ichiro: so your saying.
    your from the ghost world?
    Jun: yes your mother is there aswell.
    but not everyone can appear right after there death.
    it might take some days.
    now go home and tell your father the truth.
    Ichiro: okay I will thank you.
    however Jun was already gone.

    *back at home*
    Jin saw his son before his house.
    He ran too him.
    Jin: what happend?
    and where is your mother?
    Ichiro: she... she has been killed by DEVIL!
    Jin: NOOOO
    that can't be..
    He will pay for what he has done!!
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    Post by IWAO on Sun Sep 13, 2009 5:06 pm

    This is stuff is so good! Thanks for this. I'll read it as soon as I can! Very Happy


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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Sun Sep 13, 2009 9:26 pm

    IWAO wrote:This is stuff is so good! Thanks for this. I'll read it as soon as I can! Very Happy
    Thank you I'll do my best too write more chapters chapter 10 is also done
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    Post by Cloudie on Sun Sep 13, 2009 11:29 pm

    Nooo! Poor Ling. Sad
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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Mon Sep 14, 2009 7:32 pm

    In this chapter I'll introduce new characters and also some Tekken characters might come back.
    Chapter 10 Jin's new love
    *At the base*
    Jin and the other members of the rebel alliance and some normal Soldiers had planned a meeting today at 12:00am
    Captian: ah there you are Jin.
    Jin: shall I start the meeting Captian?
    Captian: we still await the arrivel of our special guest.
    however you may proceed Jin.
    Jin: As you wish.
    we found some old letters.
    if we guessed right.
    this could mean we found a base.
    we don't have much time.....
    Jin stopped talking.
    He saw a young beautiful girl standing there
    Captian: ah there you are Alisa.
    Alisa: please excuse my lateness.
    Captian: No matter we just started.
    Jin this is Alisa she'll be your newest Rebel.
    Alisa: I look forward to be working with you Jin.
    Jin: Your beautiful!!! Embarassed
    Alisa stared at Jin.
    Captian: eh Jin?????
    Jin: what oh I'm not feeling well.

    *Jin's new home*
    Ichiro and Celine were just speaking too Lili.
    when they heard gun shots outside.
    Ichiro: what is that?
    The three ran outside.
    it looked like som people where shooting at some soldiers.
    Seven people against 70 soldiers isn't really Fair told Ichiro to him self.
    He took his sword.
    He jumped too the soldiers and killed them one by one.
    Lili: ugh he's just like his father..
    Ichiro: now there finished.
    and what were you guys doing all alone?
    Three of the guys told there names the other 4 ran away.
    The first one was called Jason and was 19 years old He was from the USA.
    the second was another male his name was Chris 18 years old and from Belgium
    the third one appeared too be a female her name was Ada she was 17 years old.
    Chris: what do you think we were doing?
    Fighting for our rights!!!
    Ada: oh by the way thanks for saving our lifes.
    Ichiro: it's no problem..
    End Chapter 10
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    Post by Snow on Thu Sep 17, 2009 8:26 pm

    Man, you made some great works, dude!
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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Thu Sep 17, 2009 9:15 pm

    Snow wrote:Man, you made some great works, dude!
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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Fri Sep 18, 2009 8:20 pm

    *News*
    after chapter 11 I am gonna put a break.
    that is because I want too Translate my other Fanfic and this one into Dutch.
    don't worry I will stil post those so you now when I will be putting new chapters on.
    also for example.
    The Dutch version will be posted two days before the English version alright?


    Chapter 11 Training.
    Last night Jin sent Ichiro to special training too learn more about his powers and fighting style.
    In the mean time Jin thought about his time with Alisa.
    eventough it was only working.
    Alisa: Jin it was fun today but I got too tell you something.
    Jin: really? what is it?
    He was hoping that she would like him aswell
    Alisa: I saw that you love me.
    but I am not a Human girl.
    Jin: you are not???
    Alisa: yes but i still like you.
    I just want too be a normal girl like Celine.
    Jin: I know you want and that's why i stil love you.
    Alisa Smiled

    *Ichiro arrived*
    It was a strange home..
    the place where his father killed Ogre many years ago.
    Strange place for a training I have too say.
    told Ichiro too him self.
    He came inside.
    Welcome too my home or what is left of it.
    Ichiro: who are you?
    I'm your master.
    he saw someone walking too him.
    Ichiro: it's you my.....
    ???: that's right my name is Kazuya Mishima
    Ichiro: but he is what like 90 years old?
    Kazuya: I was saved so I look like still like back in the days of The King of Iron fist Tournament 6
    Ichiro: you are the one who want too train me.
    Kazuya: yes I will learn you old moves.
    and I know how your power works.

    The End of chapter 11
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    Post by Snow on Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:57 pm

    Alright, I think you truly deserved a break.
    Nice chapter again!
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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Sat Sep 19, 2009 10:13 pm

    Snow wrote:Alright, I think you truly deserved a break.
    Nice chapter again!
    Thank you Bro.
    but I have much too Translate and there is stil 5 chapters left from this one and I already have planned a new Fanfic aswell
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    Post by Snow on Sun Sep 20, 2009 11:53 am

    That's awesome! I can't wait, man.
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    Post by IWAO on Sun Sep 20, 2009 10:02 pm

    Snow wrote:That's awesome! I can't wait, man.
    Me too dude! Very Happy


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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Sun Sep 20, 2009 10:53 pm

    IWAO wrote:
    Snow wrote:That's awesome! I can't wait, man.
    Me too dude!
    hehe in two weeks I will be starting with Chapter 12
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    That sound awesome... CAN'T WAIT!!!


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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Thu Sep 24, 2009 9:51 pm

    I wil post a Preview Saturday
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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Sat Sep 26, 2009 7:05 pm

    Preview chapter 12: death
    Kazuya to Ichiro
    Kazuya: I don't care what happens too the rebels as long as G Corporation will be DESTROYED!!
    Kazuya and Bryan
    Bryan: I am afraid I can't let you do that.
    Kazuya: I have waited many years to kill the real Bryan.
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    Post by Cloudie on Sat Sep 26, 2009 10:08 pm

    Hope Kaz kicks Fury's @$$!
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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Sat Sep 26, 2009 10:19 pm

    Cloudie wrote:Hope Kaz kicks Fury's @$$!
    he will don't worry
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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Tue Sep 29, 2009 8:03 pm

    Finally the new chapter
    Chapter 12: Death
    In the temple
    Ichiro's training has come to an end.
    Kazuya was very proud of Ichiro.
    He even managed to learn everything faster then he did.
    Normally he would have hated it but times had changed.
    *A few minuts later*
    Ichiro got on his knees.
    Kazuya: Congratulations boy you have succeeded my training.
    Ichiro: so am I now a Rebel?
    Kazuya laughed.
    Kazuya: No you must Face Devil one more time.
    and try to defeat him then the world will be saved.
    Ichiro: if you hate the G corporation so much then why aren't you a Rebel?
    Kazuya stared at his Grandson.
    Kazuya: Let's just say I despise G corporation.
    Ichiro stopped asking his Grandfather questions.
    Kazuya: now you must leave I'm sure your father is missing you.
    Ichiro: thank you but what about you?
    Kazuya: I will do fine.
    I don't care what happens too the Rebels as long G corporation is destroyed!
    now just go and forget me
    With a sad fave Ichiro walked away it was strange Ichiro was one of the few who actually liked Kazuya.

    *back at home*
    Ichiro came running to his home.
    Ichiro: father father I AM BACK!!
    Jin: hmpf what was that?
    and he looked outside.
    Ichiro??
    Jin: guys Ichiro is back!!
    Lili Jin and Celine ran outside.
    Lili and Jin hugged Ichiro
    and Celine even gave him a Kiss
    Ichiro felt his head getting red.

    *At the temple*
    Kazuya heard people comming towards him.
    He turned too the other side.
    Kazuya: Bryan Anna?
    Bryan/Anna: Kazuya.
    Kazuya: I'm disapointed in you Anna that you serve Devil now.
    anna and Bryan attacked Kazuya Instantly
    kazuya: two against one isn't fair!
    He Dodges there attack.
    Kazuya Killed them both easily.
    After the fight.
    Kazuya: is this it?
    the most powerfull Members of G corporation.
    He threw them both off the temple.
    Two less to worry about he told his self.
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    Post by Cloudie on Thu Oct 01, 2009 4:49 pm

    Good job, Kaz.
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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Fri Oct 02, 2009 5:35 pm

    Cloudie wrote:Good job, Kaz.
    Thank you Cloudie
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    Post by JunkazamaFan15 on Fri Oct 02, 2009 6:55 pm

    Preview chapter 13: The Devil Gene awakens
    Jun and Ling protected Jin from Evil but now they are gone who is protecting Jin?
    Ichiro: you are not my father anymore.
    Jin: then there's nothing holding me back by destroying you.
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    Chapter 13: The Devil gene awakens.
    *At Jin's house*
    Ichiro got out of bed and as usual he went to his father's room but only finding his bed to be empty.
    Ichiro: where is my father.
    he told to him self.
    He ran downstairs.
    Ichiro: Lili where is my father?
    Lili: isn't he stil sleeping?
    Ichiro: no his bed is empty.
    Lili got worried.
    Lili: he didn't came home last night.
    But why?
    Ichiro: I fear for his life.
    Celine: what are you saying?
    Ichiro saw Celine coming downstairs.
    Ichiro: Jin didn't came home last night and I said that I fear for his life.
    Celine: impossible Jin is the strongest of us I'm sure he's alright.
    At that moment someone knocked at the door.
    Ichiro: who is there?
    and he was hoping that it would be his father.
    Kazuya: It's me your grandfather.
    Please open the door.
    Ichiro opened the door for Kazuya.
    Kazuya: sorry I came so early in the morning.
    But I have some news about your father Ichiro.
    Lili: JIN! is he alright.
    Kazuya looked at the other side.
    Kazuya: I am not sure how to tell this.
    Celine: what what is it?
    Kazuya: Jin has turned into a Devil.
    I saw it myself he killed citizens.
    Ichiro Celine and Lili couldn't believe what they where hearing.
    Ichiro: my father would never do such things.
    Kazuya: It's not your father he is now Devil Jin.
    I didn't believe this day would come again.
    without your mother and Grandmother there is nobody left to protect Jin from the Devil Gene.
    and I am afraid there is only one solution to save Jin.
    Ichiro+Celine: and what is that?
    Kazuya: Killing Devil Jin then his spirit is free to go.
    Ichiro was crying he couldn't kill his father.
    Could he?
    Celine: Where is he now?
    Kazuya: hmph He's in the USA.
    Ichiro we have to finish him.
    before he is to dangerous.
    Ichiro: Ok then I'll follow you.
    Celine and Lili: Be carefull.

    *USA*
    Kazuya: just follow me.
    Ichiro: I will
    they looked all around the country and at last they found him.
    Devil Jin flew above there heads attacking them in the air.
    Kazuya: watch OUT and he pushed Ichiro the other side.
    Devil Jin: what are you two doing here?
    Ichiro: What is happening to you?
    Devil Jin: You will not take him from me father.
    Kazuya: look at what you have done with him.
    He is almost dead thanks to you.
    Devil Jin: now your against me and I hate people who are against me.
    now Prepare to taste my wrath.
    Kazuya: I will do what I must to protect him.
    and the two started to fight but it was hopeless Devil Jin was much more powerfull then Kazuya.
    That caused Kazuya his life.
    Devil Jin used all of his power to let the eart Tremble enough to kill Kazuya.
    Devil Jin: I have been Dreaming about this for years.
    and He flew away.
    Kazuya was dead and Ichiro was Injured.
    What was going to happen now?

    Jin's destiny is sealed he will now forever be Devil Jin
    Devil Jin realised he lost everything and the world will soon feel his wrath.
    This Conflict is terrible.
    and the pain is unbearable for Ichiro Celine and Lili.
    Each of them has chosen a different path.
    It's hard to choose the right path when you know You could lose your life.
    It's difficult to see the future as the Devil Gene now Controls the world.
    A new servent has rised to serve Devil.
    They will rule for years until one day a new hope will rise to save the world.
    And Jun she is crying in heaven for her son
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    Post by Snow on Wed Oct 07, 2009 8:38 pm

    Exciting! Nice work as always!

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